Open Poetry #39 |
Dr. Love |
Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
DR. Love says that we have a 99% chance of working out I wonder? what does DR. Love know? he must have looked into my heart.. he must have seen all those heart shaped bubbles floating straight to your front door he must have heard that angel sighing... on your pillow at night he must have heard her whisper "she loves you Bob, not her" He must have felt my tears falling like raindrops on the steal roof of your heart he must have heard and won't give up... as long as we're apart... kingsangel [This message has been edited by Angel4aKing (12-08-2006 03:00 PM).] |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Julie... this was lovely - heartfelt and lovely! RDB |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
thanx aain fro your replies...you are too sweet.... kingsangel |
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superbee New Member
since 2006-11-28
Posts 7USA |
And Dr's have practice Angel so they oughtta know |
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marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
warmly sentimented...hearts apart stretch the boundaries of love..... |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
"Tears falling like raindrops on the steel roof of your heart." Excellent imagery, Angel. Strong and powerful. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
And it appears, you shouldn't give up either. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"he must have heard that angel sighing..." he did Angel and this is lovely |
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Jess Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 243Washington |
Perhaps some love potion #9 would do the trick? Anyway, this is lovely... One of those poems that make you smile and sigh when you read it. |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
Thank you evrybody for your replies... Jess~~~Got a recipe? ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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