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superlisa
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0 posted 2006-12-07 05:44 PM



If you think life is hard then you have to come in my shoes
parents fussin always discussin my imperfections
Comparing me to my nearest erections
Elections against each other
we say we love one another
unlike friends were like family
brothers and sisters mothers and fathers
caring for one another
all helping each other iin the hard times
and in the good.
expecting a phone call in the middle of the night
and figuring out whats right
doubting the main facts of your life
unlike a knife
on your wrist a test given from above
worthy of our love never doubting
his rule
you believe in your actions to make them corrections of the mistakes.
midnight dates with unknown souls from the past
your last thought was should i say yah.
to his proposal next thing you know your on the altar saying I DO
to your true.
your one and only love of life
never intended to go beyond despite of another woman in his life
shes the knife on your wrist, cutting your family in half
your kidds crying you screaming him leavin.
you by yourself in despite of knowing that hes really hurting you and the rest of the home.
just like the "super dome" destroyed but always able to be reconstructed in the error of time
now reconstructed with the "saints" by there side
enable to be the same from before but always there to comfort the most hurt soul
devastated code red, now a green light saying go to next stage of your life.
Healing little by little growing by day and night
trying not to lose sight of whats in front of you
and losing track of the rear view
but still believing that theres more hope and more blessings on the way
you try to stay intact with yourself
you’ve delt with the worst
you’ve smelt the fear in your throat
your heart beating fast
and when you least expect
its your last
breathe
gasping for air, living the last minutes of your life
your sad because your didn’t live your life to the max
in fact, you feel conformed with your llife.
next to your wife.
don’t lie to yourself its a all a joke to you but
you never know where to end
its near its hear
your llife, dear.



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