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Open Poetry #39

Souls Embraced as One

MoonShadow
Senior Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 943
Dark side of the Moon.

0 posted 2006-12-07 09:35 AM

             "Souls Embraced as One"

    Beauty so brilliant in the night
        that jealous stars do shine.
    Souls that soar so high in flight
        together, yours and mine.

    Music soothing gentle hearts
        like crying of a dove...
    Visions like a work of art...
        emotions filled with love.

    All of these are ours to share
        in warmth beneath the sun...
    To have... To hold... Together there
        our souls embraced as one.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2006-12-07 09:37 AM

absolutely lovely....

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2006-12-07 09:37 AM

Oh, what a gorgeous love write!! Thanks for sharing!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2006-12-07 10:59 AM

A write straight from your loving heart Ken.
Most beautiful indeed.
Hugs~Nancy

Sing in me muse...
and through me tell the story~

Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

4 posted 2006-12-07 01:45 PM

A fine write, with good rythym and the subject was a good choice too..thank you..

Goldenrose.

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

5 posted 2006-12-07 03:01 PM

I like the idea of the stars being jealous. That's a neat concept.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

6 posted 2006-12-07 08:17 PM

Wonderful song to this.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

7 posted 2006-12-07 09:39 PM

Beside your user name,
I'm enjoying your poetry
as well.

Write on!

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

8 posted 2006-12-08 08:17 PM

Beauty so brilliant in the night
that jealous stars do shine.

Just lovely words here... RDB

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