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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2006-12-07 08:17 AM


Upon awakening
comes this feel

again,

these delicate
woman hands
cold,

empty and alone


warmed only
by thoughts
   of yesterdays

              touch.


seek the flame within yourself
and let your soul be cleansed by
the fire of love.  Axel Ekenstierna

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Dark Stranger
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West Coast
1 posted 2006-12-07 09:26 AM


ms gs, now ya know why I wear the mittens all the time..enjoyed it ms
MoonShadow
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Dark side of the Moon.
2 posted 2006-12-07 09:26 AM


Nice imagery... beautiful sentiment.
Gentle Spirit
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3 posted 2006-12-07 09:36 AM


D, may have to borrow those mittens
sometimes, these hands do get cold

every now and then..  thanx babe.

Moonshadow, thanks for stopping in
and leave beautiful thoughts. hugs

Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945
Texas, USA
4 posted 2006-12-07 02:56 PM


Oh my, the power in this -- so short, and oh so grand.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
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The Southwest
5 posted 2006-12-07 04:41 PM



beautiful and so sad
two for two gentle Donna

I love this  
a lot...


Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
6 posted 2006-12-07 09:41 PM



Dearheart,

brevity of yours
is warming the page...

well done!


Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
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Sydney, Australia
7 posted 2006-12-07 10:11 PM


I love this write of yours!   RDB
Gentle Spirit
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8 posted 2006-12-08 08:00 AM


Nan, Kate, Sunshine and Roniece, thanks for stopping by. Hugs.
trutodaraiders
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CA
9 posted 2006-12-08 03:55 PM


I will warm those cold hands for you. ~bill
Beatrice Boyle
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10 posted 2006-12-08 04:38 PM


Beautifully done...I'm envious!

Bea

Grandma Bea

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