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The Lingering Look....
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The Lingering Look.... |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia 
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It’s there again that feeling between us The raw emotion The lingering look The hidden agenda It’s out there waiting for us to act on it |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
The spark, the gleam in the eyes and their polished opaque spangling, yes that sparks a light in the heart and smoulders until the fire rages, short but straight to the point, enjoyed..thank you.. Goldenrose. At the touch of love, everyone becomes poets. Plato 427 BC-348. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Thank you - I do tend to write short prose/poems, I admire those who write epics, I wish I could!  RDB |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
and I admire those who can capture epics in...say, just a glance in a mirror? I thought this was sexy, with all it didn't say. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
oh Karen, thank you!! I'm in awe of your work! RDB |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms rdb, kewl unzip ms |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
"A Lingering Look" a worthy testimony that 'actions speak louder than words'. Well presented, Milady. |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
very cool read kingsangel |
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Beatrice Boyle Member
since 2006-12-06
Posts 438 |
Exellent Roniece...The tension in this was palpable. Good work! Grandma Bea |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
Words are powerful either short or long. You did very good. Sometimes you dont have to ramble or write Sonnets to get your point across, Me when I read a poem; most of the time I like being left of how, where, when, why. Kudos |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Dark Stranger.. Thank you Mr Dark, you can unzip me anytime! MoonShadow ... thank you that was a nice comment Angel4aKing ...thank you! Beatrice Boyle ..Granda Bea thank you! trutodaraiders thank you for your kudos Bill ! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Your style is blissful. Enjoying your works. TD |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Thank you Diamond...I'm enjoying your work too! RDB |
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