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Sentiments Of Snow
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Sentiments Of Snow |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Sentiments Of Snow Heaven sends a soft announcement down Frosted blossoms muffle clamor soon to drown Each frozen tear unique for every weary soul The earth responds content, as silence is the goal Thankful to be cooled in drifts serene The spirit of reflection sent in winter gleam Layer upon layer, quiets anxious din to lull Skies of gray light sighs infer emotions quizzical Hushed beneath a mighty hand of white Sentimental wings pine shelter without flight Let fall, the quiet of recall, to say a season’s rite Attuned, the gifted ear has learned the silent spell Overlooking virgin dictate, fine and powdered vale Impressions of the robes of clouds now scattered fro Heaven sends a prayer to light in sentiments of snow Copyright Kkh 12/3/06 |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
I wouldnt change 1 single word on this poem. Easy reading for the humblest mind. Poetry is just the evidence of life. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
If, by chance... you ever need a weather report for the UP NORTH... read one of Kay's poems... so descriptive, easy to read... a joy to absorb, even on a day that is dreary, wet and semi-warm..(here)...HEHE |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
I've never seen such lovely snow TD |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
fine 'write' (as per usual!!) reminds me of Henry David Thoreau's ability to speak with the 'Voice' of Nature... and the fact that he was the 'grand master' of closing lines.... like the magnificent example in this poem: "Heaven sends a prayer to light in sentiments of snow" I'm impressed!!! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Your writing my mind again....this was perfection...and most definately shows an allowance within you which is a great gift...inspirational song of light in the realization, expectation is merely a word, and not a practice...for each and every moment in our lives certainly owns their own light.... Hugs you... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Ooooh...another TD keeper for my library! Brilliant. hugs, Chris Perhaps the best Yuletide decoration is being wreathed in smiles ~ |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
“Each frozen tear unique for every weary soul The earth responds content, as silence is the goal Thankful to be cooled in drifts serene Skies of gray light sighs infer emotions quizzical Hushed beneath a mighty hand of white Sentimental wings pine shelter without flight” You have blessed this reader to the core with this write. This is a really beautiful write!! JL  Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed: |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
gorgeous! |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Very cool piece TD! "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
a wonderful write! RDB |
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