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splintermend in autumn |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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you were walking your dreams there had their leash off dragging laughing when they ran too fast and suddenly got caught and whipped around on some shadow that protruded I remember your toes in the water at the edge of someone else's ocean you just borrowed some foam and left a footprint as pay said you would bring it back again if anyone missed it enough to smile there were trees behind the curtains with a sunset caught in their limbs you asked if I would fix it's wing and maybe even help it fly again even though you knew I wasn't god you thought at least he knew me so I used your faith and some time and made a splint of momentary but it fell behind the horizon anyway and left us alone in the dark and there was nothing we could do then except force our pieces together and see what they would look like tomorrow _______________ daark [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (12-06-2006 09:10 AM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Doctor, I think the surgical procedure was a success.  Well done, D. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Totally blew me away D. You've outdone yourself with this one babe. Morning hugs. seek the flame within yourself and let your soul be cleansed by the fire of love. Axel Ekenstierna |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun, thank you for the eyes lady _____________ ms gs, thanks friend for the smile |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS The bandage of love can fix many things.  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms martie, newskin perhaps? thanks lil neighbor |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Stranger darlin' is it tomorrow yet? I love this... |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
oh my!! your words continue to melt me! very very nice write Mr Dark! RDB |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ladyone, thanks hon for the eyes ___________ ms b, thank you for melting a smile |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
Wow!,..you did it again....right into the deep end of the soul....I love it!!! kingsangel |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms jul, thank you for reading and feeling |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
'you were walking your dreams there had their leash off dragging laughing when they ran too fast and suddenly got caught and whipped around on some shadow that protruded" Oh, Mr. D, this is lovely... sometimes those shadows aren't scary and just the distraction we need... So nice to read you today. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" ~Unknown~ [This message has been edited by Susan Caldwell (12-08-2006 11:19 AM).] |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Trees, sometimes their own curtains, make the most beautiful lace before they disappear in the embers of evening, when the pieces of life's puzzles meld in the night and anticipate new dawns. Lovely, daark! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms suzzieC, thanks for the girl smile here. ________________ ms kl, thanks for looking at the wall of trees with me lady friend |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
my pleasure! too beautiful not to look... |
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