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Open Poetry #39

I Love the Way

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2006-12-06 03:56 AM

I Love the Way

I love the way she tastes,
she smells, she feels.

Within her arms
living seems alive
and loving seems real.

For me she's always
been especially nice.

My precious Suzie pie,
cut me off another slice.

JamesLee
06December
2006

[This message has been edited by JamesMichael (12-06-2006 04:49 PM).]

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

1 posted 2006-12-06 04:05 AM

James... your suziepie sounds very nice!

Is there a typo in the first line? should it read 'tastes'?

RDB

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2006-12-06 10:28 AM

cute

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2006-12-06 04:50 PM

Thank you Roneice and passsing shadows for the nice response...James

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