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Open Poetry #39

Together Heart's Entwine

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2006-12-06 02:51 AM

Together Heart's Entwine

As a dream weaver spins
With love and delight
They thread more colours
Onto the black and white

Magical dreams enhance
Holding each thread
As their romantic hearts
Adds the passionate red

Capturing loving dreams
Affections take hold
Orange sunset blended
Red mixes with the gold

Twilight coloured the sky
In a soft lavender hue
Aside a sapphire ocean
Romantic dreams ensue

Together heart's entwine
Dream spinning amore
As lovers share the night
In moonlight on the shore

Hope ©2006
Link to the poem below with music and graphic
http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/102/poem_8379075.html

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

1 posted 2006-12-06 03:11 AM

oh this is lovely!! thank you for sharing it with us... RDB

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

2 posted 2006-12-06 05:27 AM

lovely colours in your poem. Lovely images highlighted by the colours

a good commitee can decimate communication.

MoonShadow
Senior Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 943
Dark side of the Moon.

3 posted 2006-12-06 08:04 AM

Nice rhyme, meter and imagery... presents a warm feeling. Definately my kinda poem. Thanks for sharing.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2006-12-06 10:27 AM

very colorful write Hope

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