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Winter/s Storm |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind 
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{From my journals} ~~**~~ that I am indeed lost in the canvas of this form so I watched the changes in you and me as if I were the souls edge where sea and tide rise – where moon greets shifting stars with the passing crumble of stone/s who will guide me to the 'rest' in nights while I drift on some winter storm awaiting each crystal to form her beauty I am as empty as the rose that tries to touch the rivers bend the season of air between palm and prayer the press of body between grain and sand silence fills you; becomes me so the rain will fall wet upon your lips drops of tin and stone and I will search for the dust of you in broken glass &breaking light to paint some color on warmth of flesh and echo my vacant dreams to bury the grey of stone in the amber of my sleep to remind me how orchids cry and I am always within the shades of your echo/s and dream/s bidding farewell Life is a balance of holding on and letting go (KU) |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
"I am always within the shades of your echos and dreams" Very powerful imagery, especially when spoken by one who prefers to dwell in the reclusive shadow of the moon. Speaks volumes to me. Nicely Written Milady Greeneyes. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
the season of air between palm and prayer the press of body between grain and sand silence fills you; becomes me so the rain will fall wet upon your lips profoundly written, it is always a feast for the eyes & soul to read you |
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shirtless Member
since 2006-04-29
Posts 359 |
a plethora of great images here I like the way italics are used to establish a second perspective thanks for sharing PLEASE VISIT MY WEB SITE http://www.anthonyarmstrong.zoomshare.com |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
1derful write  Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your writing is so exquisite that it turns my blue eyes Green! Lauren, you truly are a poetess extraordinaire! Giving you a big, warm hug, Linda |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
good to read now off toread for more from you. kingsangel |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
 sis, have missed you and your words....ahhhh...I saw your name and knew I would love this. I was correct. You soar with this Lady L....love you... |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
simply stunning write! RDB |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
 Thank you all for stopping by..... hugsss and love to all Happy Holidays Life is a balance of holding on and letting go (KU) |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
How absolutely lovely. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Lauren! You are still the same outstanding poet I have grown to love to read.. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lauren....That journal you keep is precious...keep it safe.  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Greeneyes "the season of air between palm and prayer" Is a Gem |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Thank you all for stopping by..... hugsss and love to all Happy Holidays Life is a balance of holding on and letting go (KU) |
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