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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2006-12-05 11:14 AM



skin tingles at touch
passion follows as quickly
triphammer heartbeat


Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.
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Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2006-12-05 11:24 AM


And a good morning to you Interloper!
My how I love the sound of a triphammer heartbeat!

Good one!

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

LeeJ
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2 posted 2006-12-05 11:42 AM


triphammer heartbeat, IMPRESSIVE
nicely done

ThisDiamond
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Michigan, USA
3 posted 2006-12-05 12:40 PM


Perfect is this done
By way of fluttering breaths
Tingling throughout


Perfect!

Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2006-12-05 12:42 PM


Loper~

Oh no ya' don't ... I won't be going there again~

Let's see -

You surely tempt me
To follow you in Passion
But, I know better~


*HUGLETS* to you~
~*Me

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2006-12-05 06:47 PM



diddy

*grins* at you Loper~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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