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Midnitesun
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Gaia

0 posted 2006-12-04 04:35 PM




On moonbeam highway,
side-by-side, we ride

'til celestial passions dance
as teal-dream shadows
and rainbow showers
are pulled by the sun
from our souls' surrender

casting us aglow,
resplendent in love's light,
to shine forever
in ecstasy's finest flight!


***Bruce***
thank you for the dance,
secondhandreampoet



[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (12-05-2006 08:00 AM).]

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stevepoet
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1 posted 2006-12-04 04:44 PM


Nice,good word usage and flow.
The Lady
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2 posted 2006-12-04 04:46 PM




yes
pretty teal-dream picture


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Deep in the heart
3 posted 2006-12-04 05:17 PM


GR8 write

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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just out of reach
4 posted 2006-12-04 06:20 PM


very nice!
hugs, Chris

Perhaps the best Yuletide decoration is being wreathed in smiles ~

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5 posted 2006-12-04 11:04 PM


as teal-dream shadows
and rainbow showers
are pulled by the sun
from our souls' surrender

teal-dream shadows....

inspirational...and touching

Earth Angel
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6 posted 2006-12-05 11:45 AM


I anticipated a poetic treat ~ and that is exactly what I received! Thank you! ~ twice over!


Linda

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7 posted 2006-12-05 01:32 PM


Midnitesun,
Enjoyed your collaboration, well done.

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8 posted 2006-12-05 01:49 PM


Very much enjoyed your cosmic duet!
Kudos and hugs to you both!

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

Midnitesun
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9 posted 2006-12-05 06:15 PM


Bruce and I thank each of you, for your warm replies to our duet!
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