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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2006-12-05 07:38 AM


My True

I looked into the mirrors true
And all the world came into view
In flash reflections, Adams eyes
And saw the doldrums of the wise

Each one of us a chaos ream
The start of being and extreme
We are a candle burning bright
A shining star that lights the night

It all begins a moments mind
It starts a flash from blind to find
And there we are a world of true
The world begins an inner view

From there we light the caverns deep
Burn the light until the neap
And visit us a world of stew
Each one of us a different view

We are the world an atoms wink
Awakened with an atoms think


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passing shadows
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1 posted 2006-12-05 07:54 AM


Sy, I'm always glad to see you in the mornings. You have a way of taking me away from the day's upcoming stress, if only for a moment
Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2006-12-05 08:12 AM


passing,

scorpio
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3 posted 2006-12-05 08:49 AM


Much to ponder in this write Sy. Well done!!

believe in what your heart feels...

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2006-12-05 08:50 AM


scorpio
Nice to read you again. Have a happy.

LeeJ
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5 posted 2006-12-05 09:18 AM


whataya mean "you hate to say it, but I got this one right"  (your comment on my poem) hehe...you poop!

wonderful write, mornings wouldn't be the same without your words.  

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6 posted 2006-12-05 09:53 AM


Ya got neap on the mind, Sy?
I like your use of the word
Well done!

Earth Angel
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7 posted 2006-12-05 11:30 AM


Good morning, Sir T

Your Adamic atoms are aligned perfectly!

Loves 'n hugs,
EA

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8 posted 2006-12-05 11:35 AM


What a powerful reflection. Thanks for posting this poem`

Poetry is just the evidence of life.
If your life is burning well, poetry is just the ash. "
Leon Cohen~



Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2006-12-05 01:27 PM


LeeJ
Just a scoop from poop. Have a good one.

Interloper
Ya isn't that Neap.

Earth Angel
Always nice to get straight talk.
Love and hugs back.

trutodaraiders
Enjoyed your comment, thank you.

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