Open Poetry #39 |
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You....Again |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia ![]() |
You’re in my head again Thoughts of you just won’t go away How can I stop these lustful images Of laying in your arms And being kissed every inch by you Maybe I keep them there to remind me That for a little while I was loved by you Maybe I won’t ever let them go… [This message has been edited by Roniece Dawson-Bruce (12-04-2006 02:09 AM).] |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
perhaps you won't, as it was sooooo good and real at the time...know this place...and have been complimented over and over again, by realizing this ability to be able to love like that was truly a gift of love. great write |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms b, enjoyed this reflection, cool work |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ah yes...this I well know fine write |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
some loves are simply never forgotten Roniece and the feel is what lasts longest this is lovely... |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
short and heartfelt |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Keep them in your memory chest! Well done ![]() Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
Warm memories... like a good classic film... are worth rewinding from time to time and reliving the moment. Excellent descriptive write. Thanks for sharing. |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
I can relate...and the only fear is that the real thing will be better than the dream... kingsangel |
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