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trutodaraiders
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0 posted 2006-12-05 12:10 PM



Her beauty alone my eyes have seen,
My eyes have seen her stunning face,
Her stunning face no artist dreams,
No artist dreams such gentle grace.

Such gentle grace could God create,
Could God create such a wondrous thing,
A wondrous thing that blessed my soul,
My soul now hears the seraphs sing.

The seraphs sing when love exists,
When love exists two hearts will share,
Two hearts will share an eternal love,
An eternal love they'll both declare.

They'll both declare a love for each,
A love for each to last till death,
Till death at last removes the love,
The love that's lost with their final breath.
    

Poetry is just the evidence of life.
If your life is burning well, poetry is just the ash. "
Leon Cohen~



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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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1 posted 2006-12-05 01:07 AM


Bill I like how your have joined your words here... it works very very well

Be well
Roniece

passing shadows
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2 posted 2006-12-05 07:59 AM


this is beautiful

thanks for sharing

trutodaraiders
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3 posted 2006-12-05 04:56 PM


Thank you passing shadows. Im surprised Roniece how it came out

Poetry is just the evidence of life.
If your life is burning well, poetry is just the ash. "
Leon Cohen~



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