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Angels |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA 
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When Angels flit 'cross star kissed skies, And touch my soul with choral splendour, My heart is stilled by the beauty of your eyes, And I know a love, I've never known, so tender. When Angels come in nightly dreams, And breathe a love of immeasurable bliss, My life is raised to unknown realms, And you, forever, become my wish. When Angels bring their unseen love, And kiss my mind with the beauty of you, My soul is blessed from the invisible, above, And the visible then - is all I knew. Poetry is just the evidence of life. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Bill.... I love the work that Angels do!! and I want to say to you .... You are definitely a beautiful poet and keep writing please and know I'll keep responding in kind  Be well Roniece |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
You are very sweet, indeed I have many to post. With posting 3 a day it would take me 100 days to post all my poetry. Thank you for your kind words. I would blush if my apartment wasant freezing. Poetry is just the evidence of life. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
you are most welcome my sweet friend - come to Sydney the days are much warmer.... much like spring days in paris!! Roniece |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
careful what you post! I bet you didnt know that my bags are already packed; I might have to exchange my plane ticket (; Actually I have a flight leaving in 4 hours from California to Oklahoma. I would love to come to Sydney. I will definetly make a note. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Oaklahoma!! I love that musical! Sydney awaits you my sweet friend! Travel safe! RDB |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I love this angelic post. Angels, are indeed among us. Have a safe flight. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
I love those Angels flitting 'cross star kissed skies Bill I can see them have a good trip... |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
Very dynamic wording creates excellent imagery.... Imagery is fast burning fuel for creativity in the mind... makes for a wonderfully visual read. You succeeded with this on very well. |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
Thank you moonshadow Poetry is just the evidence of life. |
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