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Open Poetry #39

To Greet The Season

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

0 posted 2006-12-04 10:43 PM

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the Long Night's Cold Moon

full moon of new fires and death

quietly calling

©2006 by icebox

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LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2006-12-04 10:58 PM

full moon in winter time, means cold cold nights...

I love the longing this portrays...
and beginnings....

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2006-12-04 10:59 PM

tonight would be fine
to toast impending winter
red wine, crystal glass

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

3 posted 2006-12-05 03:49 PM

I like that. It reminds me of the ancient custom of putting out all the fires, and starting the new year with new fires. Not so easy to do without matches.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

shirtless
Member

since 2006-04-29

Posts 359

4 posted 2006-12-05 03:59 PM

greetings ice

I really like the line break at the end of line two; it makes death both passive and active

glad you posted this

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The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

5 posted 2006-12-05 05:39 PM

stark and perfect

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

6 posted 2006-12-05 09:08 PM

~*~
Baby, it's cold out
Come inside to get warmed up
The fire is waiting
~*~

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