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Moon Trimming ( tanka )
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Moon Trimming ( tanka ) |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach 
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 . . . . . . oh, if I could fly like an angel without wings through the stars I'd stream laden with festive trimmings just to decorate the moon . . . . . . . Chris Barker December 2006 ~*~*~ |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
I love the poem, and the pic. Nice view of decorating the moon! Poetry is just the evidence of life. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Your tanka sure soars!  Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ChrisLane~ I think we're gonna have to call you Kris-of-the-Moon-Kringle-Lane~  This is just gorgeous !! *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Truto & Interloper - thankyou both for reading and commenting. hugs! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Ah Marge...you slipped in while I was thanking others. You're a sweetie! Hugs & thanks. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
oh, if I could only see you trim the moon... what a treat this is so delightful Chris! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
many thanks kind Lady. hugs! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful Tanka Chris! It's beginning to look a lot like Christmas.  Hugs, love and miss ya, Teed.  |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Yes !! It's snowing Teed !! Luv Ya and miss you lots!! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Chris, how utterly gentle, beautiful, divine. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Such a lovely comment! Thankyou Lee & Hugs! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I love how you do these! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Hugs n' Thanks Dixiedoodlegirl !! |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
O, I like that. What a neat idea, and well-expressed. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hi, Chris Angel! It appears to me that you have done a wonderful job of trimming the moon!  Delightful post! Lovin' hug, Linda |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Nan & Linda - thanks and hugs to both of you for reading and commenting! |
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