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Web Of Reality |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States 
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Web Of Reality By Paul Wilson The night screams lonely dreams searching…searching for compliance or reality it seems Be gone I say the web you weave the pain you leave saying you really care (imagine that if you would) Each night tempting me all the while with your innocent smile darkness calls me to you Dreams are for lovers and little children I’m told alone each night no one to hold save your charms for one that begs your call The line of reason marks my doom dreams of realities gloom I’ll play your game I’ll pay the price I dreamed till dawn... broke the spell you weaved your web so well I paid the price now return to hell The place bad dreams dwell ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ Paul |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Paul, There is only one thing I am sure of and that is that things change. Happy dreams next time. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I relate to this! Very powerful write! Nice to read you |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Paul, wow, its been a long time since I read here, and this is so strong. Everyone has grown since I have been here, it seems. I have these same thoughts, but you wrote them well. Sandra |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Bad dreams make the good dreams seem all the sweeter! Gosh, you caused a few of my less than desirable ones come to the fore!  Sweet Dreams, Dear Poet!  Linda  |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Seymour...You are right, I need the good one's to become a reality. Thanks for the read...Paul Dixie...Hope your's aren't as bad as mine. LOL. Thank goodness they are only dreams. I appreciate you taking time too read and reply...Paul Sandra...So nice to hear from and old friend. Hope all is well with you. Thanks so much for your reply and for thinking my writing has grown...Paul Linda...I bet if our dreams met face to face they might scare each other LOL. Thank you for reading and for your dreamy reply...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
Ahh, very nice I can relate to the feeling of being tangled in love's web. Kudos! Be gone I say the web you weave the pain you leave saying you really care Poetry is just the evidence of life. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Paul I wish you only good dreams ahead... enjoyed this write of yours Be well Roniece |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
trutodaraiders...Thanks. Purely fictional, just rambling today...Paul Roniece...Thanks...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
when you ramble Paul you ramble well I like this... |
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MsSouthernOrchid Member
since 2003-07-12
Posts 192 |
Paul, I agree, you do ramble very well. A good write. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
sssssssshhhhhhhhhhhhh....kiss yer forehead... Sleep sweet my Paullie, k?  They do go away yanno...everything does, sometimes that is good, and sometimes it's not so good. But it all passes lovie.  thank you for writing your sweet heart. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Wow. Poe-ish in substance, and had my thoughts exploring my own experiences. Extraordinary write Paul… JL  Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed: |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
The Lady...Thank you very much. Glad you enjoyed this...Paul MsSouthernOrchid... Thanks for taking time to read and reply. Glad you think I ramble well...Paul Serenity...Some do some don't, Some of them seem so real. If I were a smart person I would know what causes dreams and how to control them LOL. Thanks for the kiss...Paul JL...That's a mighty big compliment. Thanks for relating to this...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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