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Open Poetry #39

Lust and Lies.....

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

0 posted 2006-12-03 06:13 AM

The words inside my head
Don’t match the thoughts I want to say
They are complete opposite
My words are tender, caring and straight from my heart
My thoughts are callous, hard and betray the lie
How does it work then
Being in lust with you
Is living a lie that can never be

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

1 posted 2006-12-03 07:23 AM

ms b...everyone has to start somewhere? enjoyed this one

trutodaraiders
Senior Member

since 2006-12-02

Posts 820
CA

2 posted 2006-12-03 12:07 PM

So many times in life have a struggled with conflicts of the heart. A friend once told me that she loved, and at times hated him. I thought this poem reflecting contradiction from are heart, and mind. Short but a good poem

Poetry is just the evidence of life.
If your life is burning well, poetry is just the ash. "
Leon Cohen~

Angel4aKing
Senior Member

since 2006-09-27

Posts 1372
USA

3 posted 2006-12-03 01:52 PM

I have been trying to put this same message into words...you did a great job. I can relate to thoughts betraying me....sometimes they don't always reflect our hearts

kingsangel

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

4 posted 2006-12-03 11:01 PM

oh Roniece
I like this so much
and understand it even better!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2006-12-03 11:12 PM

you probably already know that I've been here

good way you pinpointed it

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

6 posted 2006-12-03 11:17 PM

thank you all for reading my work... appreciate your comments.

Be well
Roniece

MsSouthernOrchid
Member

since 2003-07-12

Posts 192

7 posted 2006-12-04 12:21 PM

How does it work then
Being in lust with you
Is living a lie that can never be

Roniece,
I really like this line. Enjoyed very much reading this.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

8 posted 2006-12-04 01:05 AM

Thank you Ms Southern - appreciate you reading my lines...

RDB

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