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| Open Poetry #39 |
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Lust and Lies..... |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia 
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The words inside my head Don’t match the thoughts I want to say They are complete opposite My words are tender, caring and straight from my heart My thoughts are callous, hard and betray the lie How does it work then Being in lust with you Is living a lie that can never be |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms b...everyone has to start somewhere? enjoyed this one |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
So many times in life have a struggled with conflicts of the heart. A friend once told me that she loved, and at times hated him. I thought this poem reflecting contradiction from are heart, and mind. Short but a good poem Poetry is just the evidence of life. |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
I have been trying to put this same message into words...you did a great job. I can relate to thoughts betraying me....sometimes they don't always reflect our hearts kingsangel |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
oh Roniece I like this so much and understand it even better! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you probably already know that I've been here good way you pinpointed it |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
thank you all for reading my work... appreciate your comments. Be well Roniece |
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MsSouthernOrchid Member
since 2003-07-12
Posts 192 |
How does it work then Being in lust with you Is living a lie that can never be Roniece, I really like this line. Enjoyed very much reading this. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Thank you Ms Southern - appreciate you reading my lines... RDB |
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