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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest 
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outside my window lies a thin beribboned moon whispering something about new love clever girl she knows so much I saw this ghost moon riding high pale at 3 this afternoon slipping over blue sky as if she were getting away with something now at slow past midnight she keeps me company makes me promises someone else will have to keep |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
oh I love this!! You describe the Moon very nicely indeed  and I like the fact it's a SHE!! Be well Roniece |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you Roniece the moon is so powerful it has to be a SHE! yes? |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
powerful and strong, and brilliant and mesmerising and talented and sooo much more - YES the moon is indeed a SHE RDB |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
agreed  |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
I like the way how you described the moon. I must have read over 100+ poems about the moon and stars. This poem was not over characterized by adjectives like bright white crystal clear florescent moon. Plain and simple. It was not a mess. I knew what you meant. I did not need a master degree to read this poem, and thank you. Because ever since I joined this website I have had websters dictionary bookmarked *lol* thank you for posting this poem. I look forward to reading more Poetry is just the evidence of life. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ladyone..I too was looking up,,someone left the sky light on huh..enjoyed this |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lady....Slow past midnight ....love that and the feeling within, day or night.  |
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Tom Zart Senior Member
since 2006-05-18
Posts 682 |
Just a beautiful poem the web needs more poems as good as this one. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Lady Kate, I saw lady Luna there last night too, perhaps we were gazing upon her at the same time in our different places. Was that, that hug I felt? Loved this Luna write, Kate. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I love reading the philosophy which drips from your pen, as well as the confidence with a warm face...each poem seams a beginning without end |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
The moon is one of my favorite poetic subjects. Enjoyed Sandra |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you Bill Stranger darlin’ I saw you looking up thank you Martie thank you for your sweet comment Tom, thank you so much ah yes, gentle Donna that was a hug you felt I’m sure she was the same moon LeeJ what a lovely thing to say thank you thank you Sandra |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kate~ You write sweet tune of a swooning moon It catches me in it's phasing~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I love it Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
There's a lovely swell of inner sound to the magic of this piece, Lady K... a wonderful presentation. |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
Nicely done!! Bravo! A well written and worthy Lunar tribute. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you dear Marge… Interloper thank you kindly sir... Lady In White thank you so much thank you MoonShadow |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you James... |
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