Open Poetry #39 |
A Rose By Night |
sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
A Rose By Night Softly bathed in pale moonlight I came to greet a rose by night Delicate was this blossom fair That spread her perfume through the air So captivated by her charms For want to hold her in my arms But passing through the shadows deep This love I saw I could not keep Another held my lovely rose As the moonlight sadly did expose Tight and warm was their embrace As tears of heartbreak streaked my face This is my soul of ice cold fire That burns with rage and sweet desire Crumbled fragments of heart remain Shattered dreams and endless pain I’ll tell it to the nightingale So it can sing the woeful tale Of how true love was lost from sight When I came to greet a rose by night |
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openthoughts Member
since 2006-01-16
Posts 94Where the child can be free |
I particularly loved the structure of this poem. I feel it flows very nicely accompanied by beautiful use of words. I love this poem |
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sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
Thank you for the kind words, I appreciate it. Take care and Have fun. Steve |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
sigh... you sure can write love Steve |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The ache of the moonlight was as dew. Emotionally rich, both in color and contrast. TD |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
I always loved your poetry. This is no exception. I love roses, too..you catch their heady sweetness perfectly in this romantic touch of velvet. ~ Klassy |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Not all roses shall leave the frame of any man who knows its name.... |
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