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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2006-12-02 07:29 AM


Seeing

Sensitivity
Its divinity
The delivery
Within me

Regardless of awe
Whatever the light
To see in the core
Transcendence of white

Passing the Dante
Expressed in good and crime
Of my tortured way
The end game of time

The dance of the fife
The toll and the goal
The meaning of life
The meaning of soul

All this that I see
Mine and yours to be



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Kethry
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1 posted 2006-12-02 07:46 AM


lovely rhyme in this although the lines are shorter than what I'm used to from you they are no less compelling.
Regards
Keth

a good commitee can decimate communication.

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2 posted 2006-12-02 07:49 AM


All that, and you.



Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2006-12-02 08:24 AM


Keth,
Thank you my friend for the read and nice comment.

Sumshine,
Thank you dear.

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4 posted 2006-12-02 09:24 AM


Seymour~
A little different from you ...
yet, in your brevity ... you are STILL brilliant~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2006-12-02 10:50 AM


Marge,
And you are still the sweetest.

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6 posted 2006-12-02 05:49 PM


take care, sweet sy,   its been nice, but all is in gods hands now~
Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2006-12-02 07:54 PM


MGROVES
It always has been.

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8 posted 2006-12-02 09:47 PM


i know, yet i dont like being the butt end of a joke~
Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2006-12-02 10:27 PM


MGROVES
Forgive me but I am ignorant of the joke.

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10 posted 2006-12-03 12:24 PM



brief indeed for you Sir Sy

and still you play upon my heartstrings

lovely...


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11 posted 2006-12-03 08:18 AM


Lady
I tip toe among the tulips?

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