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Morning (rictameter)
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Morning (rictameter) |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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Morning A time of peace Softly the new day dawns Darkness gives way to golden rays Luna slips away quietly to rest As sunbeams shine o're horizon Whispers farewell to night Birthing today Morning. I have felt the healing in the fingertips, burning up with fire;I have held the hand of the devil, it was warm in the night, it was cold as stone-I still haven't found what I'm looking for.....U2 |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
love it especially this line gentle Donna "Birthing today" and birthing us anew... |
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Edward Grim Senior Member
since 2005-12-18
Posts 1154Greenville, South Carolina |
Very Nice... |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
how do you do this?? these words are beautifully penned - I love your work!  Be well Roniece |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
a nice December beginning  M |
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stevepoet Junior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 46 |
beautiful.good rhythm to the whole thing.Please give me feedback on mine,its down the page.Thanks. Steve |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Donna! And...good morning to you too. Hugs~Nancy ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~ |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
simply superb! I've never written in special 'poetic forms' such as this....I am always greatly impressed by 'writes' like this! |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oh, how lovely!! Very nice Donna. hugs, Chris |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
rictameters is something that I am learning to do. And other various style's of writing. 10 years of unknowning styles I surely appreciate this poem Poetry is just the evidence of life. |
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