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Open Poetry #39

I Will Love You Forever

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2006-11-30 11:14 AM

I'll love forever
From the moment,
I saw you,
I knew you were the one,
Forever and ever,
You'll be my love,
I'll love you,
Till the end ,
Fovever and ever,
I'll stay in my heart,
I'll love you,
Forever and ever,
We'll never part,
Together, together,
We'll stay forever like this,
With out you,
I wouldn't live,
Together, together,
That's how it should be,
Forever and ever,
I'll love you,
Till the end,
Forever and ever,
You'll stay in my heart.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2006-11-30 12:50 PM

LovelyVanDana~
So beautifully you always write of love~

Good to see you sweet lady~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - [email protected]

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2006-11-30 03:43 PM

Dear Vandana, the song of your heart is very contagious ... the reader feels that you speak your truth and is touched by the intensity of your feelings.

Lovely!
Love,
Margherita

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2006-11-30 05:08 PM

Enjoyed...James

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2006-12-01 12:03 PM

that's how it should be

lil' Angel
Member

since 2003-11-14

Posts 116

5 posted 2006-12-01 01:00 AM

it's beautiful.

Lil' Angel

"There is no wisdom, no insight, no plan that can succeed against the Lord." Proverbs 21:30

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

6 posted 2006-12-02 05:51 AM

beautifully penned it is!

Be well
Roniece

trutodaraiders
Senior Member

since 2006-12-02

Posts 820
CA

7 posted 2006-12-03 04:51 PM

Forever is a dream, but can be a reality. Very sweet poem.

Poetry is just the evidence of life.
If your life is burning well, poetry is just the ash. "
Leon Cohen~

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

8 posted 2006-12-03 06:31 PM

rosanna vandana, you write of love, so sweetly. Yours is a loving and loyal heart.

Giving you a warm hug,
Linda

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