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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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you didn't wear much then when you got up to put the water on morning teas are always the best you said and I read between the fine of your lines the print less patterns pale with perfect structure poetry for brail savoring we didn't linger long afterwards more of a fall in feast and run in our different directions without directions we circled I think often is my favorite word you wear it on your shoulder when you pass by in the taxi just so I will know you think of me in my funny hat that says always _________________ daark |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Often suits you...  lovely, D |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
lovely babe. often looks so darn good on you....good morning... [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (11-30-2006 08:32 AM).] |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun, thanks lady _____________ ms g, thank you for the touch |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS....you look real cute in that funny hat.  |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
She's a lucky chic.... kingsangel |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms martie, thanks little neighbor ______________ ms jul, thanks for the eyes... |
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tek Junior Member
since 2006-11-30
Posts 32Austin, USA |
i love great little poem like this. awesome. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Stranger darlin' please keep you funny hat on always... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
tek, thank you for the read _________________ ladyone, will wear it just for you babe, thanks |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
I love the visuals here... you are an awesome poet Dark Stranger and I love reading your words...  Be well Roniece |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms B, humble thanks to you |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
awww.... I always get a different reaction from your writes than others...but I still get a smile  M |
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stevepoet Junior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 46 |
very good.This poem kept my interest very well. Steve |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms MMs, thanks for the smile ms ____________ steve, thank you for the review |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
take care, its been a real experiance and a laugh have fun, |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms g, thank you for the review [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (12-03-2006 09:34 AM).] |
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