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Eye talk |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity 
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 Marc Chagall - Amanti rosa *** Eye talk There you stand at the threshold, the contours of your face blurred by the backlight. You look like an Angel and I am drawn into the mystery of your deep magnetic eyes. Through this channel of light the eloquence of feelings rushes forth storm like, inner tremors of rapture play crazy heart rhythms excluding any rational thought. Come closer, touch me! Your eyes have invited me. No greater intimacy I have known than this unmistakable eye talk silent flashes of pure truth, to which I unhesitatingly surrender. Come closer, let me lean unto you! No longer can I resist the utter splendor of you. I can’t bear distance anymore, it’s time now to merge, our eyes have shown the way. Sweet love of mine where have we met before? I recognize your touch. This memory has traveled across time and space since forever and we are meant to collide … again and again, forever and ever we shall know this unique tune of Oneness. Now open your arms and let me enter the warmth of you, hold me tight, close your eyes, lead me into ecstasy. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Oh so very beautiful this is Marherita!! This is the epitomy of love..... Nicely done sweetie!!  |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
exquisitely beautiful Margherita |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Very, very lovely indeed!!!!. Joyce |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Splendor is the love you write, left in beautiful picture on my mind. TD |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Beautiful write, Margherita! "our eyes have shown the way." Yes, they always do, don't they? |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Margherita, this is beautiful I remember that picture and it's just perfect for this write! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh my goodness!! This is gorgeous!!!! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Exquisite! Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Such a passionate write on the contact of eyes, but how right you are ...thank you.. Goldenrose. At the touch of love, everyone becomes poets. Plato 427 BC-348. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
yes dear music lady, the eyes tell all, and this set the stage so well, emotionally deep and inspiring.... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I really enjoyed the silky flow of this...one of your best...James |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Yes, Eyes, the door to our soul...the light that shines brightly and guides our way... Such a mysterious part of us... a very beautifully written poem... |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
wonderful words! I enjoyed reading this very much Be well Roniece |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar' smoooooooothly pleasurable to read |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sigh....such expression took me there for a moment.  |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Exquisite!...... [another finest rendering of "Love's dejavu"!].... particularly: "Sweet love of mine where have we met before? I recognize your touch. This memory has traveled across time and space since forever and we are meant to collide again and again, forever and ever we shall know this unique tune of Oneness. Now open your arms and let me enter the warmth of you, hold me tight, close your eyes, lead me into ecstasy" simply wonderful! |
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tek Junior Member
since 2006-11-30
Posts 32Austin, USA |
a very nice love poem indeed. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you all my dear poet friends for your loving replies, which fill my heart with joy. Love, Margherita |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
Yes, I will repeat what has been said before (it deserves it). Beautifully written and rendered; with soft, tender passion and yearning. Truly outstanding write. Thank you. CG |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Margherita LOL How did we ever pass each other in the night. This glows  |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Margherita, Magnificient! You have described something so perfectly that I have felt. There are a few people who I've known whose eyes made me feel we were One, and for no real reason. I really like the mystic and romance in your writing. This is definitely one of my library favorites! Thanks for posting it. misce |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you CG, Seymour and Misce, I enjoyed your loving replies. Love, Margherita |
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