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themute
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since 2006-05-08
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0 posted 2006-11-27 10:36 PM



Gentle angle pleas hold your sighs;
It was the current took us farther
So now we stand in hopeless tides.
As limit scolded, we now reside
In hopeless oceans drowning love.
My heart remembers, but love will die.  

I am the two-toed wanderer

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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
1 posted 2006-11-28 08:02 AM


I know this

too well

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2006-11-30 05:10 PM


Nice writing...James
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