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a place called 'Once Upon'.......
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a place called 'Once Upon'....... |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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Is it ‘too late’?! [on lost optimism] In a place called ‘Once Upon’..... Time has frozen dusty dreams sleeping in corners with forgotten promises stirred only by the death-wind past ruined runes of "lost love’s” wisdom chanting all the heart’s enigmas. SHE has come to shine sunlight on my tattered truths and shattered hopes in renewal songs of soul-salvation may I still dare to listen to the ‘Voice’ of Spring..... In a place called 'Once Upon'?! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Good schtuff  |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The philosophy of "once Upon" is a viable destiny...preparation through the past, in anticipation of the best ever future. So often, we hastily write the outcome in the now. Nice flow to this one, strong and forthright. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
secondhanddreampoet Unce upon is the seasoning of dreams. A pinch of this a pinch of that and you sew up the seams. Enjoyed the read. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"may I still dare to listen to the ‘Voice’ of Spring..... In a place called 'Once Upon'?!" Oh yes, you must still listen.. for the child within is waiting to hear more about the place called 'Once Upon' This is a keeper of a write..LOVE IT!!!  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
oh Bruce. .... sigh.... I LOVE this. Once upon a time.....I tend to visit there so often. Thank you for this delightful read. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
..and thank you all for your comments!....this 'write' was particulary 'special' to me! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
~forever sighs offered and heard, as once upon a time is now, and forever~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bruce...so many live in a dream of what once was, when they could take that wisdom and use it in the present....that's what it was meant for. In the end the sun shines from within. Enjoyed this....gave me a chance to spout some of my own philosophy. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
love's more comfortable the second time you fall like a friendly home the second time you call ~Cahn/van Heusen I have noticed SHE is in caps any lady in caps must be deeply loved dare to listen to the voice of spring dare... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: In the very moment when you dare to listen, you will be out of that place and launched into a wonderful NOW. Dare! Beautifully expressed! Love, Margherita |
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