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Born To Simply Joy
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Born To Simply Joy |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Born To Simply Joy My head, softly between the velvet knees of trembling now I am moved, beyond words or descriptive terms Such determination pushing forth in vigorous expression Subliminal incantations give direction, to bring your body near Sighs my mind explores, rippling regions of vast encores Where I am fit, by shape and purpose into elegant repose As if you are water, soaking into me, by heart such radiant touch Alluring storms that mimic creation, jagged and breathless Mold me to the thunder of speechless extravagance and wonder Unbound by terms of mortal man, deft clinical curb of contraband Simply moving and moved to be all as I was born to be Held gently to your heartbeat, in the carving of this love, a simple treat As was born to simply joy Copyright Kkh 11/26/06 |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Muh Muh Muh mmmmmmmmerrrrrrrrrrrrrrcy... WOW. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Well, after Magnus gets through stuttering, he'll come back with another comment, I'm sure.  As for me? I simply enjoyed.  |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
TD, I liked the mix of this, strength, sensitivity, and sensual! As per usual, I enjoy the way your choice of words and sounds move the poem. A pleasure to read misc |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
inspiring! |
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MsSouthernOrchid Member
since 2003-07-12
Posts 192 |
I enjoyed this one. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Simply excellent! Perhaps the best I have had the most pleasant opportunity to read from this fine poet. This is another case where single lines and couplets are almost poems in and of themselves...such as: "Where I am fit, by shape and purpose into elegant repose"....or: "Alluring storms that mimic creation, jagged and breathless Mold me to the thunder of speechless extravagance and wonder" MUCH applause! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
gr8! |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"Simply moving and moved to be all as I was born to be" What a beautiful write. JL  Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed: |
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