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| Open Poetry #39 |
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A Picture's Worth |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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I think about tomorrow and the yesterdays' come through, allowing me the comfort in the soft of view or two. When perspective was a carefree song and loving saw no end. I think about it often when lost feelings rise again. I watch him when he walks by and I wonder what he thinks. Mistakes were made twice over and the rosy paled to pinks. So faded are the memories and feelings once so strong, I wonder what he thinks about since separated long. Does darkness leave him lonely as I often have that feel? Do holidays and remembrances fulfill the need to heal? I look at portraits like a child still wondering what went wrong. But it's too late, there is no more. Those words, now thoughts in song. It's been awhile since hearing them, those three, that warm a heart. The meaning of has hidden truths that sets the world apart. Tomorrow I will think again knowing all the world's a stage believing in the call of love despite advancing age. Tonight I'll think of yesterday and comfort in mind's view remembering the once upon, a picture's worth or two. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (11-25-2006 09:08 AM).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
wonderful dreaming of once upon. a good commitee can decimate communication. |
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MsSouthernOrchid Member
since 2003-07-12
Posts 192 |
Good read. I can relate to this one. |
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Pressie Member
since 2006-11-14
Posts 157Oklahoma |
"Does darkness leave him lonely as I often have that feel? Do holidays and remembrances fulfill the need to heal? I look at portraits like a child still wondering what went wrong. But it's too late, there is no more. Those words, now thoughts in song." Thanks M for letting us peer with you. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
At times we all come face to face with our happiness and our suffering...James |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Well done, Maureen. Sentiments penned to perfection. Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Tonight I'll think of yesterday and comfort in mind's view remembering the once upon, a picture's worth or two. Maureen, this is marvelous poetry, my oh my, your muse is certainly in tune with soul...I believe this is one of the best poems you've written, well, in my book, my very most favorite of yours. amazing write!!! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you Keth, nice to see you here. MsSouthernOrchid, that's the fun of poetry, being able to relate to what you read.  Thank you Pressie for stopping to read...and welcome. Thanks JamesM ..holidays can be lonely so you have to think about some of the past joys in life. Interloper, always nice to know you are here I..wish I had the energy to even read more but the Winter(darkness) is not my favorite time of the year unless it's snowing and the world looks so bright. It's early to bed and early to rise...for now. LeeJ, so good to see you back..missed you. I was just having a "holiday moment" remembering how it once was and wondering if I was the only one feeling this way. Thank you for your lovely words. Mostly, I am too tired to write..not that I don't have the thoughts..just my brain and fingers don't feel like cooperating for now. It's those 26 six year olds...just imagine having the brightest children in the school as your class. Speaking of which..they each have poetry journals...  M |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
If there is ever another book done this has to be in it! I loved the feeling in this Maureen, and you couldn't have said this better... quote: If you want it - it will come, and until then a picture speaks more than a thousand words, it speaks love. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Yes, do believe in the call of love! The impermanence of life has still much in store as you proceed on your own Path ... Beautiful and touching write! Love and hugs. Margherita  |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Enjoyed your Once Upon. Nicely done. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
meloncholy but sweet slice of life as once was and can only be looked back upon many of us veteran goddesses here can more than relate  |
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