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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest 
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aluminum chairs on the evening of that building sun dropped over rooftops lower east side blue and green awnings folded setting colors played tricks on dirty windows old men young boys in payiss strolled in that space before the sun left and evening became sabbath we spoke theology my demon love and I my hand smoothed golden hairs under cambric shirt he licked tips of my fingers looking at them in waning light his kiss lay on my lips flickered the eternal third star are you christian in the baptist sense I asked his smile thrilled yes I would select christian for without such there is no sin |
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wredgranny Member
since 2006-11-18
Posts 493Ky. USA |
aluminum chairs on the evening of that building sun dropped over rooftops lower east side blue and green awnings folded setting colors played tricks on dirty windows old men young boys in payiss Siyo Lady this I like very much,I can see in my mind as these things take place. Sigi I am learning!
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I looked at the title and thought "what in the world?" and then saw it was by you... I knew I would not be disappointed |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Your writing comes from a very special Kate place.... and I am so glad that it comes... Hugs sweetie. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Kate, you have woven certain of us into a timely place and a better space... write on. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Amazing writing...absolutely amazing!!!  Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
sinfully delicious ladyone, enjoyed it |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lady This and a sip of wine lays a mist o'er my mind.  |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you granny for your lovely reply Dixie thank you for reading and for your kind reply gentle Donna thank you so much hugs to you dear lady Karilea thank you always… thank you thank you so much Nancy  Stranger darlin’ it actually happened glad you enjoyed it Sir Sy a bit of Manischewitz blackberry perhaps? |
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