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Foxyoasis
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0 posted 2006-11-24 08:01 PM



the more i feel the
more i cry

the more i try the
more i die

little bits of pieaces
within myself make me realize
this and this alone

i make my own future


and i decide to live..and not
let it take me under again no
not this time.

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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Enchantress
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1 posted 2006-11-24 09:14 PM


Atta Girl...stay strong Julie.
I know it's hard..but, you can do it!
Write me anytime..I am right here.
Heart hugs~Nancy

Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~
                                    

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Member Patricius
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just out of reach
2 posted 2006-11-24 09:41 PM


I am with my sister Enchantress on this one Julie - you can do it!
hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
Carl Sandburg

wredgranny
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since 2006-11-18
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3 posted 2006-11-24 10:30 PM


and i decide to live..and not
let it take me under again no
not this time.

Siyo little sister wise choice,your words are as beautiful as you are.There is so much to see,so very much to feel do not cheat yourself of every thing to experience.Loves,some stay some go,rain on a warm summer day,the smell of fall on sweet breezes that hold a touch of chill.Your first grandchilds precious kisses.No matter the troubles little one there are always those small things in life worth living for!


  granny!

passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2006-11-25 12:06 PM


Amen!
scorpio
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right...there
5 posted 2006-11-25 08:09 AM


Poignant words Julie...you inspire us.

believe in what your heart feels...

Marge Tindal
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6 posted 2006-11-25 09:16 AM


HiJulie~
I'm with sister Enchantress here ... stay strong ... and hold the hand of a friend~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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Gentle Spirit
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7 posted 2006-11-25 09:22 AM


Julie I know and understand that staying strong is sometimes not easy, but your words alone show me how much strength you have.  Be well sweetie, and hugs.

There are many sisters here who are holding your hand dear girl....

Foxyoasis
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Atlantic Beach,Fla
8 posted 2006-11-25 12:02 PM


awe thanks gods that is so sweet of you

and thanks enchatress i did write ya back a lil its kinda big story though haha

everyone else as always *hugs*

im trying to keep my head on straight.

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
9 posted 2006-11-27 05:50 PM


Yes, our choices play a tremendous role in our future...James
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