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FNG Member
since 2006-02-07
Posts 477 |
I have loved you. I knew you did too. we were innocent, with God as match maker. I locked you out, My heart's screaming, wrenching. To reach you, not to ditch. But I had so much problems... so much which I didn't think you could take. I can carry the weight myself, you will have a better bet. You tried so long, I still couldn't hitch. I can only love you, somewhere, somewhere. It's my way of loving you, giving you a chance to find. Someone who can bring you sunshine, not bitter-sweet smiles. I loved you, will love you. In a special way. Hope you can understand.. somehow, somehow. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Nice. Although filled with passion, it doesn't slap you in the face with it. a good commitee can decimate communication. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I understand this  |
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FNG Member
since 2006-02-07
Posts 477 |
thank you kethry for your comment  Thanks for passing by, passing shadows. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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jarrett Member
since 2006-05-10
Posts 72Ut, USA |
it's amazing I loved it. Thanks Patricia Jarrett |
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