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PEBBLES
Member

since 2006-10-30

Posts 69
South Australia, Australia

0 posted 2006-11-24 05:31 AM

Black Dog

I can't get over it
this feeling that consumes me
it eats my soul bit by bit
No one else can see.

I don't sleep well at night
It gets angry now
I beg with all my might
that it would understand somehow.

But it refuses to hear
and it punctures my soul.
Despite my many tears
it leaves a bleeding hole.

As I search for my escape
I hope I can reshape
But it renders me weak
And won’t allow me to seek.

The Black Dog bites’
My tears fall in vain.
No relief in sight,
Only grief and pain.

I'd tell it how much this hurts
if I could only speak
as my happiness reverts
I stay humble and meek.

I feel myself sway,
my scent a disease
so, who here would answer
my most desperate pleas.

What does it matter
my life here on earth.
All it ever does is shatter,
after every rebirth.

Forgotten, I give up hope
letting my life go
it ties me up by rope
And stabs my soul.

Life apprehended
  Sanity suspended

                                                                             HelenIL.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2006-11-24 07:48 AM

Helen, I can relate to this one..a feeling I had long ago but never forgotten

wredgranny
Member

since 2006-11-18

Posts 493
Ky. USA

2 posted 2006-11-24 03:15 PM

I feel myself sway,
my scent a disease
so, who here would answer
my most desperate pleas.

What does it matter
my life here on earth.
All it ever does is shatter,
after every rebirth.

Forgotten, I give up hope
letting my life go
it ties me up by rope
And stabs my soul.

Life apprehended
Sanity suspended

Siyo Helen this makes my heart to cry,I do not know what or who has hurt you so very deeply but sister I send sage smoke for your healing. This troubles me so deeply when our own dreams turn against we are left shaken and lost,when we lose someone again we are lost stunned and shock it can happen to me.My spirit sings to yours my sister to bring you hope!
manny blessings!

granny!

PEBBLES
Member

since 2006-10-30

Posts 69
South Australia, Australia

3 posted 2006-11-25 07:16 AM

Thankyou.Any comment from such fine writers as you two women ..?is truly valued. Certainly I pray that the journey forward will be a whole lot better than the one behind. Many thanks from down under. Helen

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