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inspirational_insights New Member
since 2006-09-10
Posts 7Buffalo,NY |
I write to express myself and to let out my pain I don't even think I got blood, ink runs through my veins, I write! I write for that girl who feels all alone, that girl with that child who is forced at 16 to be grown, that's why I write I write for that boy who dosen't have a voice: A victim of the streets, he is apart of the crowd, husslin on "his block" when he is only a child, I write out loud for the law and it's PERMISSION to kill! : "shooting sombody is wrong but the lethal Injection is cool?, what!" (that's exactly why I write) Instead of letting them know they werent right, they would rather take another life Another family up all night! as i push my pen against this paper and, ...... I write. I write to have the right to keep on writing my opinion, until success is Mandatory, until it's the clearest vision ".....who me?.....oh...I just write!" I got my own way of talking loud, my own way of fighting! call me tomorrow and chances are that I'll be writing! because I write I write for those who are stressed, those who are tired of fighting and I know the world will never change, so i will never stop writing! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I like the rhythm in this, and the use of repetition....it's very effective. Keep on writin'! |
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