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themute
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since 2006-05-08

Posts 469
Maryland

0 posted 2006-11-23 01:35 AM

Hello woman,
With passing days you have brought me highs higher than my dreams have lent me, yet with every time I see you, you get me closer to loving you more; you have also put me into the deepest lows so as to believe I’ve hit the bottom, yet with each depression you bring me lower. Are you my light? You bring me the joy of the immensity of the beauty of passing seconds. You are the reason I want to make you happy. Each word from your lips is as important to me as the breath in your lungs and the beating of your heart. You are my religion woman. I pray to you that I can reside in your arms. Where is the transcendence, where is the magical affection that takes care of all of our problems; do they not exist? I suppose the answer is obvious enough, such love is fantastic. And I do love you woman, in the way that is most true; the single truth is false. My love is true; it changes. Every time I feel lost, your comfort is pacific. When I get nervous, the thought of you makes me brave. I wonder what your true love would do to you, will do to me.
Woman, you are my religion. I will never give up on my love for you, as much as you have love in god. To be good to you is to be truly good, to make love to you is to be truly loved. To be loved by you is to rest easily in the beautiful ecstasy of my gods embrace. You are the singularity of my hopes, the one apple of my eye. I have waited for a lifetime it seems to be where I stand, with you. I have been put on the pedestal of your confidence, but I am at the foot of your affections. I don’t understand you; I love you, but do not understand you.
I will say this to end. I will love you forever, but give nothing I do not deserve, and don’t tell me you love me until you truly feel so. All I ask, all I pray is that you don’t bar me from your heart, don’t exclude me for reason. I will love you forever.

                                  Truly yours,
                                      Man

I am the two-toed wanderer

[This message has been edited by themute (11-23-2006 11:39 AM).]

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

1 posted 2006-11-23 05:42 AM

All I ask, all I pray is that you don’t bar me from your heart, don’t exclude me for reason. I will love you forever

Hello gorgeous boy... you have written volumes here from your heart, your soul, your being.... very much enjoyed

Be well
Roniece

Sunshine

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2 posted 2006-11-23 08:13 AM

An interesting letter...and from a soul with perspective. Well done, poet.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

3 posted 2006-11-23 08:19 AM

Extremely well written Matthew!!
Very much enjoyed reading your thoughts.
Hugs~Nancy

Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

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4 posted 2006-11-23 08:28 AM

Matthew~

Such beautiful poetic thoughts of love~
I know of many women who would adore receiving a letter like this~

VERY THOUGHTFULLY WRITTEN~

Poetry is all things ...
words of the heart shared is truly one of the most beautiful of them~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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passing shadows
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displaced

5 posted 2006-11-23 09:11 AM

this touches me
but you knew it would

Midnitesun

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Gaia

6 posted 2006-11-23 09:52 AM

Matt, you are an 'incurable romantic'
which in my book is a very great comliment.

Happy Thanksgiving dear friend/poet/Scorpio!
Now go back and fix one typo
(please? longs...to lungs)

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

7 posted 2006-11-23 10:28 AM

Very nicely done. Much enjoyed.
hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
Carl Sandburg

themute
Member

since 2006-05-08

Posts 469
Maryland

8 posted 2006-11-23 11:47 AM

Thanks Kacy, that was such an eye soar wasn't it.

This letter was for all of you, it's how I feel about the women that i come to love. The women that I feel so much for that I would write volumes in the attempt of expression. Im not even close to being at the end, nor am I as eloquent as I would like.

Thank you all for the love you send, I send it back in spades.

I am the two-toed wanderer

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