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Open Poetry #39

Thunder and Rainbows

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2006-11-22 06:46 PM

Lady of the ‘Rainbow Lights’

Although the Thunder spoke
in omens of relentless night
and judgments hard upon
    my heart
O lady of ‘Rainbow Lights’
infinite rose among  thorns
you have rekindled
   my passions
in the selfless sanctuary
   of your soul
to weave the moonlight
‘neath a star-tipped sky
in trembling dreams
and new hopes born
in fine surrender....
   to the dawn!

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2006-11-22 06:59 PM

NIce writing...James

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

2 posted 2006-11-22 07:22 PM

What lovely expression you have colored here.
Beautiful.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2006-11-22 09:05 PM

and a brand new day it is!

Angel4aKing
Senior Member

since 2006-09-27

Posts 1372
USA

4 posted 2006-11-22 11:58 PM

I love these 2 lines ecspecially, a lot of thought in this one....Enjoyed it very much..

to weave the moonlight
‘neath a star-tipped sky

kingsangel

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2006-11-23 09:12 AM

secondhanddreampoet,
Your palette is full of rainbow color.
Enjoyed

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

6 posted 2006-11-23 12:38 PM

~sigh~

wredgranny
Member

since 2006-11-18

Posts 493
Ky. USA

7 posted 2006-11-23 08:26 PM

to weave the moonlight
‘neath a star-tipped sky
in trembling dreams
and new hopes born
in fine surrender....
to the dawn!

Siyo Secondhanddreampoet,so go the stories of grandmother spider and the children of the night Rainbow riding! Sigi for story fire memories shared with the beauty of your words!

granny!

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

8 posted 2006-11-24 05:35 PM

I really liked this...came back for another sip.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

9 posted 2006-11-24 06:25 PM

My oh my..glad I dind't miss this one!
Beautiful!!

Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~

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