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The Lady
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0 posted 2006-11-22 12:13 PM




when pale morpheus
grips your hand
leads you to his ebony bed
feather covered  
redpoppy strewn  
he will appear the man  
you long to touch  

in the realm of darkness
where stars glow softly
illuminating the skies in sigh

his shoulders are sanctuary
for the ache and desire
that beguiles

come then, the soothing
gentle touch of palms
whispering psalms

the gossamer down of night
cradling soft the curve
of a dreamer’s contentment
casting white mist
to black memory

dream is but a sunbeam    
cast upon the dim of night
erasing
heart sting

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Deep in the heart
1 posted 2006-11-22 12:50 PM


Lovely

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Pressie
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2 posted 2006-11-22 01:25 PM


"the gossamer down of night
cradling soft the curve
of a dreamer’s contentment
casting white mist
to black memory"

Kate and Donna's duet weave a seducing web of poetic delight!

Omnia vincit amor

TP

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2006-11-22 01:28 PM


Lady
You both did very well.

wredgranny
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4 posted 2006-11-22 01:35 PM


the gossamer down of night
cradling soft the curve
of a dreamer’s contentment
casting white mist
to black memory

Siyo Lady and Gentle Spirit,where dreams exist there is forever hope,these words are sweetly beautiful!


  granny!

Earth Angel
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5 posted 2006-11-22 02:17 PM


The Lady has a Gentle Spirit ~ and the Gentle Spirit is a Lady! Together you weave an alluring tapestry of seduction!

Your collaboration is commendable! Very well done!!!



Linda

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6 posted 2006-11-22 02:53 PM


Beautifully penned by two of Passions finest!
Most enjoyable read indeed.
~Hugs to you both, Nancy~

Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~
                                    

The Lady
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7 posted 2006-11-22 03:52 PM


thank you all

I have no idea how it happened
it seemed quite by magic
I said
and she said
and there it was

gentle Donna
thank you
for the magic...
hugs to you


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8 posted 2006-11-22 04:39 PM


Thanks to everyone.  Like Kate has already stated, she said, we said....and there it was.  She made this seem so very effortless
and Kate dear Lady this was such a pure joy for me to blend my words with you.

HUGS you, and thank you for everything.....

Dark Stranger
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9 posted 2006-11-22 04:39 PM


ladyone and gs, nice splay of day dreams, enjoyed it you two
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10 posted 2006-11-24 10:00 AM


Two talents entwined in such beauty of words!  A very enjoyable read.
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
11 posted 2006-11-24 06:34 PM



Maybe it is because the sun
has just winked it's last bright
or perhaps, that it is just before
the heat turns on;
or maybe it is the poem
that cast chills down my arms...

but this is indeed
a lovely read.

Hugging both of you!


The Lady
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12 posted 2006-11-24 09:24 PM





thank you Stranger


amberhues
thank you so much

Karilea  
thank you for your kind words    
and those nice hugs

Gentle Spirit
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13 posted 2006-11-25 09:02 AM


Thank you Stranger.

Bri, so good to have you here
and thank you dear.


Karilea, hugs for everyone and many many thanks...

Kate, you are a pleasure to write with and even more to know. Hugs sweet lady.

JamesMichael
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14 posted 2006-11-27 06:13 PM


Enjoyed...James
LeeJ
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15 posted 2006-11-27 09:31 PM


whoa!!! You both compliement each others words so well...this was an amazing read, the flow was easy, yet, deeply soulfelt...terrific!!!!  Going back for another read.

Thank you ladies, well done!!!!

The Lady
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16 posted 2006-11-27 09:43 PM



thank you James

thank you so much LeeJ
it was an amzaing experience

Gentle Spirit
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17 posted 2006-11-28 04:59 PM


James, and LeeJ, thank you both so much...

It was amazing indeed, and soooo magical..
methinks the lady weaves her magic wonderfully...

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