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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2006-11-22 10:11 AM



habana is in mexico
it is all in the hand
and the hand made
the tan of thigh
and lick of leaf
seduction in robusto

candy skin cleavage
leans me to buy bricks
just for the tormenting
of waiting while they occur
one by one slowly
a week perhaps of nights

tequilla is tiptoe truth
on the tongue of courage
even in greek speak
the eyes tell the lies
and receive the replies
in exchange for a kiss

and a gypsy yacht sunrise


__________

daark

scribblenote..a place down roserita way where handmade stogies are a visual experience..

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MGROVES
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1 posted 2006-11-22 10:17 AM


sounds nice

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2006-11-22 10:25 AM


ms g, thanks for the eyes
Angel4aKing
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3 posted 2006-11-22 02:57 PM


I have never been to mexico....heard it's alot of fun....the tiptoe truth...be brave petron!!!!

kingsangel

Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2006-11-22 02:59 PM


ms jul..this is just down the road a bit..from the dock...you'd enjoy it, thanks for the wave
The Lady
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5 posted 2006-11-22 03:33 PM




Stranger darlin'
I love habana
no matter where it is
tormenting
is a major pastime there
like futbol
si?

Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2006-11-22 03:42 PM


ladyone, would say yes I think.  thanks ms
JamesMichael
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7 posted 2006-11-22 06:49 PM


Enjoyed...James
Dark Stranger
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8 posted 2006-11-23 09:44 AM


thanks james
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
9 posted 2006-11-23 12:00 PM



No matter how you describe things,
no one can do it quite like you.

Enjoyed this pleasure, poet.




Dark Stranger
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10 posted 2006-11-23 07:09 PM


ms sun, thank you for the eyes
Moonkist
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11 posted 2006-11-25 06:20 AM


liked the imagery, Dark Stranger
very colorful and fun

peace,
Moonkist

Freedom Now

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
12 posted 2006-11-25 06:49 AM


Boy do I lead a boring life...well at least my surroundings are

M

amberhues
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13 posted 2006-11-26 02:18 PM


tequilla is tiptoe truth
on the tongue of courage


Truer words never spoken, Dark Stranger.

Gentle Spirit
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14 posted 2006-11-26 05:03 PM


D, tequilla....mmmmm yeah, will do it to you everytime buddie....     Enjoyed your words Stranger
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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15 posted 2006-11-27 01:31 AM


how did I miss this one!  loved it !

Be Well
Roniece x

Dark Stranger
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16 posted 2006-11-27 07:06 AM


ms moon, thank you for the eyes

_____________

ms MMs it could be wild everywhere you go..thanks ms

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ms amber, thank you for the read

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ms gs, thanks for the whisper

______________

ms bruce, thanks hon

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