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amberhues
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0 posted 2006-11-22 07:58 AM



Silver wings shimmer
flight of morning songs
in blue cloud skies

where the welcome companion
of distance not only welcomes me
with its warm embrace

it fulfills the need
to keep me from falling

for you.

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2006-11-22 08:02 AM


sometimes distance is good
Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2006-11-22 09:12 AM


ms hues, what is it they say about distance, just a thought away?  enjoyed this one
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Gaia
3 posted 2006-11-22 10:45 AM


smiling at this,
and especially enjoying DS reply

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Deep in the heart
4 posted 2006-11-22 11:48 AM


Yes, distance is relative

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state of mind
5 posted 2006-11-22 11:50 AM



bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

wredgranny
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6 posted 2006-11-22 01:44 PM


it fulfills the need
to keep me from falling

for you.

Siyo Amberhues
SO beautiful!


  granny!

The Lady
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7 posted 2006-11-22 03:18 PM




"it fulfills the need
to keep me from falling

for you"

ahhh very clever
well written too!


amberhues
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8 posted 2006-11-24 10:27 AM


Thanks for the comments and warm welcome to Pips, I am so happy that my gentle friend directed me here.  
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