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MsSouthernOrchid Member
since 2003-07-12
Posts 192 |
Remember Me? ________ Do you ever think of me as you walk through your life? Does my face ever cross your mind, I, who was once your wife? Does your heart ever soften for the one you left behind, or am I just a fleeting memory pushed back in your mind? Do you sometimes wish to change the choices that you made, or would you take the same path knowing the price you paid? Sometimes a road once taken leaves no room for a return, thus leaving you no option but to let your bridges burn. Still, I wonder... do you ever think of me? |
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wredgranny Member
since 2006-11-18
Posts 493Ky. USA |
Sometimes a road once taken leaves no room for a return, thus leaving you no option but to let your bridges burn. Still, I wonder... do you ever think of me? Siyo MsSouthernOrchid I wonder how many women share this thought in this sad throw away world we live? Perhaps they do remember,but for we who were left behind better to look forward with no regret the choice was taken from us,so be it,eh?
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
don't know if they remember me, but I do, remember them, and have learned a great deal for the knowing... excellent contemplation |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
heartfelt and touching |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I'm sure men think the same thought as well. Even men can be human  Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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MsSouthernOrchid Member
since 2003-07-12
Posts 192 |
Thank you everyone for the kind words. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
A most honest and heartfelt write. Very nicely penned. Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~ |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
I am sure he thinks of you Ms nicely done |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
This says so much and is very touching. aziza |
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FNG Member
since 2006-02-07
Posts 477 |
"Sometimes a road once taken leaves no room for a return, thus leaving you no option but to let your bridges burn." He might have regrets, but so true...we let the bridges burn....with no option for return. Heartfelt read here, it touched my heart. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Interesting that you answer your own questions and yet still dare to question. If I was him I would think of you fondly. Cheers Kethry a good commitee can decimate communication. |
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MsSouthernOrchid Member
since 2003-07-12
Posts 192 |
Thank you everyone for the kind words. I'm so glad you liked the poem. |
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