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ballajosue
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0 posted 2006-11-22 03:53 AM


Everyone’s critique
is produced
like food.
survival of the fittest
the fight of your life
it goes on
your skin is made up of random eyes
someday, one of them will bite.
you are the definition of
“you think you know
but you have no idea”
and in all these thoughts
I’ve defined myself.
I’ve fooled you all once again.

        

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2006-11-22 07:40 AM


this is cool
ballajosue
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2 posted 2006-11-22 08:38 AM


thanks. glad you liked it!

        

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Gaia
3 posted 2006-11-22 09:11 AM


enjoying this side of your face
  

ballajosue
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4 posted 2006-11-22 09:39 AM


whats wrong with the other side of my face :-\ lol thanks

         

Midnitesun
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Gaia
5 posted 2006-11-22 10:37 AM


not a darn thing!
have a great week!

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Deep in the heart
6 posted 2006-11-22 11:50 AM


Fool me once, shame on you.
Fool me twice, shame on me

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

ballajosue
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7 posted 2006-11-22 07:27 PM


live and learn.. live and learn.. lol

        

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