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PERFORATED LINES
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shirtless Member
since 2006-04-29
Posts 359
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PERFORATED LINES footprints in the snow leading from a door tracer bullets marking seams in the sky the buttons of a blouse the scar stitches leave along a wrist coupons in a magazine everything clings by the mercy of our hands along these perforated lines PLEASE VISIT MY WEB SITE http://www.anthonyarmstrong.zoomshare.com |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Fold at the dotted line, and see the lives fall. I like the way you extended the metaphor in this one. Well done. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Anthony... your writing is sooooooo wonderful! Another piece enjoyed by me! Be well Roniece |
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Benji Glaab Junior Member
since 2006-08-28
Posts 12Ontario/B.C Canada |
This is wickedly off the hook muchly enjoyed by mineslef. |
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