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Open Poetry #39

The Pet Shop Mogul

Edward Grim
Senior Member

since 2005-12-18

Posts 1154
Greenville, South Carolina

0 posted 2006-11-20 01:42 PM

The Pet Shop Mogul

Pet Shop Mogul
in the lates of life
hunkered down with spam
in missile silo.

There’s a ferret on his
finished script.
He’s revisiting writing,
revising Oklahoma and Midnight Cowboy.

Tomorrow he will die.
Tomorrow he will die.

Pet shop mogul
on the skates of to-do lists
before he floats a honeybee
on wheels of a singular nature.

Rode a motorized unicycle
on route to Walhalla
accompanied by female butcher
armed with ample cleavage.
She was smarter than him,
he knew it too.

Remembered his sins
in the blue-rayed heaven
of fish tank rapture.
Nets and transparent bags
tools to detain,
instruments of the prelude
to flush.

Tomorrow he will die.
He’d be dead without tomorrow.

Yes it's me...

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

1 posted 2006-12-01 12:36 PM

accompanied by female butcher
armed with ample cleavage.

Such vivid images and clever word play... your poems never disappoint! *S*

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2006-12-01 12:49 PM

Grant~
*giggling* here ... Suthern picked my favorite image lines !!
We DO think alike~

Unique portrayal here in the all of this write~

(Hey, thanks for the nice comp on my photo too)
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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