navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #39 » phaedra in morning
Open Poetry #39
Post A Reply Post New Topic phaedra in morning Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2006-11-20 07:39 AM


your brought your tomorrows from a garden
and laid them on a worshiper's altar
then made those sacrifice sounds

with your saliva before you spoke
and your words were quiet feathers
brushing the edges of bare

nudity was your only notion in beige
applied without sparing the lavish

the scent of viking forests aroused you
your eyes didn't deny the pleasure
that a whisperer's blade brought to mind

as winds were carving between the limbs
a song that only the willows would hear
when they leaned to love the curves

of your velvet morning's phaedra
______________

daark



[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (11-20-2006 12:16 PM).]

© Copyright 2006 ©Dark 2k - All Rights Reserved
Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

1 posted 2006-11-20 04:54 PM


as winds were carving between the limbs
a song that only the willows would hear


I think that would have been such beautiful sounds to hear buddie.  Nice one D.  

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
2 posted 2006-11-20 06:25 PM


ms gs, thank you donna for the touch here
The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
3 posted 2006-11-20 06:56 PM




Stranger darlin'
viking forests will do it
every time

very nice

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
4 posted 2006-11-20 06:59 PM


ladyone, thank you shimmer speak for your eyes
nakdthoughts
Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
5 posted 2006-11-21 06:22 AM


and your words were quiet feathers
brushing the edges of bare


you need to write a sensual dictionary...or thesaurus...


M

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
6 posted 2006-11-21 06:57 AM


ms MMs,   thanks for the read and the comment, you would have to help me ya know
gather all of those words. (grin)

Angel4aKing
Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372
USA
7 posted 2006-11-21 04:19 PM


wow you did it again.....I  have touched this place once.....the welocome was the only answer...why was I there the only question...Thanx again, Julie

kingsangel

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
8 posted 2006-11-21 04:29 PM


ms julie, perhaps we both were there just at different times yes?  thanks ms
Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #39 » phaedra in morning

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary