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Open Poetry #39

The Existance of Nothing

exhale
Senior Member

since 2003-06-13

Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2006-09-10 09:34 PM

on the cement
sidewalk
watching strands of my hair
dance in the wind
and I'm breathing that air
feeling that air
surrounding me
wondering why it is
I can't fly
seperation of mind from body
letting light
be just light
letting my body
forget to exist
forget to behave
dancing dancing through this light
on this cement
sidewalk
without a trace
of an examined life
without a trace
of
me

Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

1 posted 2006-09-13 05:25 AM

We are all components of the elements and as such exist perfectly within it, an interesting write here, enjoyed..thank you..

Goldenrose.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

2 posted 2006-09-13 05:39 AM

Exhale, I've often had similar thoughts...yes, why? Enjoyed this....jo

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

3 posted 2006-09-14 10:50 PM

excellent work...

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