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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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Lethal Love I am lone-man; empty-man; every-man torn... by the vicious, fragile beauty of wounded love wordless; hopeless; loveless you avenge yourself on clear hearts. I am drained loveless; hopeless; wordless; I am every-man; empty-man; lone-man. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Clearly written...could feel the sting. The writing style you chose sets the tone very well for this piece. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I'm waiting for the medics to transfuse this person...bleeding is an understatement. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
minimalist work nicely done Bruce... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this was ornate, descriptive and sadly felt by the reader...enjoyed |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Well done! |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
thanks everyone! (I don't intend to 'voyage on the dark side' too often!....this 'write' was simply self-catharsis) |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bruce...."wounded love" ...sad that so many feel this...you touched the emotion of it well. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah Bruce..will a hug make it better?  A most interesting write.. different from your usual, and I like it!! Hugs~Nancy Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~ |
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