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icebox
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in the shadows

0 posted 2006-11-19 08:37 AM



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my place is clearly

in the light of time's candle

flickering shadows


©2006 by icebox
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© Copyright 2006 icebox - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2006-11-19 11:24 AM


it is peaceful there

and even more peaceful in knowing

wredgranny
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2 posted 2006-11-19 11:33 AM



my place is clearly

in the light of time's candle

flickering shadows

Siyo Icebox it is good to see someone who is able to see their place in time and not be afraid,but takes comfort rather in who they are in that time!
blessings


  granny!

Martie
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3 posted 2006-11-19 11:42 AM


icebox....I seek out dappled light...maybe for the same reason, or maybe just because it has more depth.  I like this poem!
The Lady
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4 posted 2006-11-19 03:34 PM



poignant
sometimes your poems
leave me speechless


Magnus
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5 posted 2006-11-19 07:52 PM


You certainly have a way with saying a ton
within but a pound...and your wisdom does
well for you.

Pressie
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6 posted 2006-11-19 08:12 PM


A lot of meat there icebox....

A poem that takes time to work your thoughts around, but you appreciate the time taken when it's done.

Susan Caldwell
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7 posted 2006-11-19 09:22 PM


and the candle that spreads your light, shadow or not, will be scented with the most powerfully sweet scent that it brings tears of joy to the eyes of all that smell it.  Just because they have experienced it.

I miss you.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

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