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themute
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0 posted 2006-11-17 11:51 PM



Leaves falling like paper from a desk, tremendously.
They cascade to my feet, shoeless.
Reds and yellows with green spines, tired.
Letting the wind nudging, take them softly
Into dreams, eternal.
I watch their death as comfort, healing.
A single leaf aloft in the air, dancing,
As if to say: accept me, the cycle.
Mortality’s beauty turns dust into truth

I am the two-toed wanderer

© Copyright 2006 Matthew Patrick Holbert - All Rights Reserved
XOx Uriah xOX
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1 posted 2006-11-18 12:00 PM


uh huh   ::smiles::   Another wonderful pondering and penning found its way across my dusty threshold of preference.  Thank you.
passing shadows
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2 posted 2006-11-18 12:39 PM


damn
MsSouthernOrchid
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3 posted 2006-11-18 12:47 PM


   I am new to the open forum. Just wanted to let you know I enjoyed this one.
themute
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4 posted 2006-11-18 01:19 AM


Uriah, i hope you hold what my pen so wrote closely in its passing. We should pass like this more oftin.

Shadow lady your single word speaks layers, all of which I hold laughing and feeling astonishment.

To the Southern flower, i hope you have good times expressing yourself on this fantastic comunity, perhaps we'll cross paths again, but with role reversal.

I am the two-toed wanderer

latearrival
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5 posted 2006-11-18 01:05 PM


Ah, should my life be as beautiful as a falling leaf, the knowing that soon I would be refurbishing the earth to make new growth, would entertain me with beautiful dreams on the way down. Should I land beside your feet,I would look up and gift your talents with a smile. martyjo
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